Task Pitch

For our task pitch we were able to show the class our initial idea for our coursework project.

Classmates Feedback

After our pitch our class mates gave us feedback and questioned our methods, after this we dropped the idea of having a gang back story, as our classmates suggested that this would be diffucult to demonstrate in the 2 minutes, they also admitted they were confused by the idea and thought it was better without it.
They all liked the idea of a chase
74% of the class thought the idea of flashbacks was confusing and cliche, due to the high percentage we decided to drop it.
They also advised us not to add or mix another genre in with the thriller/action saying that it would be diffucult to achieve in 2 minutes.
They also mentioned that it could be improved by simplifying the idea -so by removing the flash backs and the revenge back story.
They also liked the title (However it has now been changed due to the many changes)